Hey [@DangDude]! Thanks for submitting this thing and stuff. Also, here's some stuff: Under saving grace you have "the will to live for herself" and - oh, actually, you edited this. Nevermind. Good work. Anyway, just remember that the saving grace also brands itself on the warbrand and you're good to go in that department. Other than that, the only real problem in your CS is your warbrand itself. (No problems with the actual blade, just its powers) "wielding it allows her to distort her image, though often unaware to the beholder. A strike that should have landed somehow misses, a swing you thought you dodged yet it cost you your arm. Though it seems small, it makes it very difficult to determine things such as the true attributes of her blade. Is it truly as it appears, or something quite more deadly…? Who’s to say?" Anyway, distorting the wielder's image is actually a really cool and fun idea for a power. The fact she's unaware it does this is lame, however, and I suggest you just scratch that part out. But the actual issue (sorry for beating around the bush) is where you talk about the [i]"true attributes of her blade"[/i] - what true attributes? Is it how it appears? I really don't know, The point of the character sheet is to [i]inform us about these things.[/i] I actually do like where you're going with your cs, though, and I can't wait to see you develop your ideas some more. If you don't want to reveal all the warbrand's powers, that's fine, just make sure you PM me (or TheLoneRook, but he's lame >:o) (...or both of us) the powers so we can check them off and make sure they're all right and dandy for the rp. However, if you [i]actually don't know[/i] what its powers are, that's an issue you'll have to fix on your own time, lol. <3