[quote=@Crabs]
Hey [@DangDude]!

Thanks for submitting this thing and stuff.

Also, here's some stuff:

Under saving grace you have "the will to live for herself" and - oh, actually, you edited this. Nevermind. Good work. 
Anyway, just remember that the saving grace also brands itself on the warbrand and you're good to go in that department.

Other than that, the only real problem in your CS is your warbrand itself. 
(No problems with the actual blade, just its powers)

 "wielding it allows her to distort her image, though often unaware to the beholder. A strike that should have landed somehow misses, a 		
	swing you thought you dodged yet it cost you your arm. Though it seems small, it makes it very difficult to determine things such 
	as the true attributes of her blade. Is it truly as it appears, or something quite more deadly…?
	
	Who’s to say?"

Anyway, distorting the wielder's image is actually a really cool and fun idea for a power. The fact she's unaware it does this is lame, however, and I suggest you just scratch that part out. 

But the actual issue (sorry for beating around the bush) is where you talk about the [i]"true attributes of her blade"[/i] - what true attributes? Is it how it appears? I really don't know, The point of the character sheet is to [i]inform us about these things.[/i]

I actually do like where you're going with your cs, though, and I can't wait to see you develop your ideas some more. If you don't want to reveal all the warbrand's powers, that's fine, just make sure you PM me (or TheLoneRook, but he's lame >:o) (...or both of us) the powers so we can check them off and make sure they're all right and dandy for the rp. However, if you [i]actually don't know[/i] what its powers are, that's an issue you'll have to fix on your own time, lol. 

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OH no, she would know the actual length and characteristics of the blade, I was moreso trying to state how anyone else looking at the sword wouldn't be able to tell. It wouldn't make much sense to have her not know the characteristics of her own sword. I was thinking about maybe making it so that that's just what her sword looks like because of its powers, but truly be completely different, although I think I'll probably scrap that idea. Like I said though, I'm super tired so I started wording things kind of weirdly. I'll probably change it a bit in the morning, but I just wanted to make sure I got my character at least somewhat done so I could make sure I was going in the right direction. The powers are pretty limited to that for now though; making her blade look shorter so that the person dodging is still hit/nicked, or distorting her own appearance in order to avoid attacks. I'd like to expand the abilities a bit to make decoys or even change her appearance completely for a limited amount of time, but that also kind of  goes against her character so I might add them and have them just be something she morally chooses not to use?? Like I said though, things probably better to think about after sleep.