[quote=@ProPro]
[@Demon Shinobi] Well the first thing that instantly jumps out at me is that he's missing the ambition entry. Probably just a simple oversight due to how late you were working on this, but You'll need to add in whatever his dream is. Apart from that, just a little more on history detailing what he did to get caught and locked up by Krabbe, and the Kite 2.0 will be good to go!
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OH SHIT!!! 
lol I mean I technically have him a dream I just gotta detail it. I KNEW I was forgetting something. I also wasn't sure if I should go further into detail on later history after he left because of the original rule stuck in my mind about not talking about there becoming a pirate or stuff like that. But I can definitely add this stuff in! No worries whatsoever!!

Side note: I fell off reading the ic, but has anybody made a "are you feeling it now mr. krabs joke/reference/meme. Cause if you haven't that's a wasted opportunity and you know it lol