[@Jaded] It is better, and if you wanted to leave the modifications and skills section as-is I would be fine with that. I'd still like you to correct the history section, but I doubt you forgot. After you fix that, you should be good to go, I'll check that once it's corrected and you can move him to the CS tab. If any other members post a character from Erialond I might suggest you iron out the two character's relationship in the first IC post, or maybe change the "history" section to reflect their relationship (whatever that may be). Subjects are normally exposed to each other before the contest begins, after all.