[@HumanMusic] While I am glad you're excited enough to do this quickly, and I think there's an idea there that could work, he can't be accepted for various reasons.  

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[*]You'll need 2-3x the size for your history for me to think you truly worked at it. 
[*]You need to be more creative with your traits. For example. Instead of just strength, and saying 'he is strong' go with...
[b]Stout Strength[/b]: Due to Ghallager's robust size and barrel chest, this burly man can lift far more than one would expect from one so plump. His cable-like muscles come in handy when he needs to haul riggings or hoist barrels of loot!
(I didnt go with his real physical description yet, just going with if he was stout). 
[*]And I said in the top part of the character sheet that you arent supposed to put the pirate ship role yet, though I thank you for letting me know what you're vying for. 
[*] Bold the things that need bolding, and re-read for grammer and sentence structure. 
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[u]Edit: Also importantly, I already specified Hand cannons and gunpowder is rare and expensive. He cannot have one unless he has an insanely good reason.[/u]

I didn't list everything, but I hope you can take these to heart. I'm not saying he won't ever be accepted, either. Just not as is.