[@Fabricant451]- No comment, its good. 

[@McHaggis]- No Comment, its good. 

[@Bishop]- The Character needs to lose the resistance to mage spells. There is no reason for the character to have it since we have no crunch that says other supernaturals ever acquire resistance to magic. Being lit on fire repeatedly doesn't make you resistant to being lit on fire or smashed by a rock or electrocuted. I have some reservations about this character as a whole but I'm going to reserve judgement until I've seen the character in action so i'm putting my faith in you because I think this could be an interesting character

[@Ihinka]- No comment, its good. 

[@Alfhedil]- Needs to clarify her naval rank. There is no way she went from Non com to Lieutenant. She would have had to be commissioned as an Ensign and then she never would have seen combat. It needs to be like Chief Petty Officer or at most Warrant officer. Other than that the CS is good.

[@Queentze]- looks good

[@Natascha]- Physical appearance (spelling). that is a super knit pick but I just happened to notice it


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