[quote=@Themerlinhawk]
[@Alfhedil]- Needs to clarify her naval rank. There is no way she went from Non com to Lieutenant. She would have had to be commissioned as an Ensign and then she never would have seen combat. It needs to be like Chief Petty Officer or at most Warrant officer. Other than that the CS is good.
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That's a derp on my part and why I really prefer to do that kind of work with an internet connection lol. I'll go and correct her rank to CWO2, as it should be. For some reason I had the ranks switched around and thought an LT was lower than it actually is.

Edit: Corrected CS.