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I do like it better than my examples, but I would be remiss if I didn't prod at it at least a little bit. It is of note that for the most part variety of food is not such a big deal. Most of the population being peasantry there are not going to be a whole lot of people clamoring to have beef after chicken and so forth. I would like you to include what their short term plan to take care of the harvest is in the event they cannot pay to import food. Be as ungenerous to this as possible. Yes they are allowed to not have a plan and be so confident that their primary plan will work they didn't come up with a plan B, but still I would like it to be stated one way or the other.

Secondly, I would like you to expand on what you mean by socialist democracy. Socialist and democracy are sort of flexible words, for example democracy could range from mob rule to a multi-tiered representative structure. Additionally how does heir brand of socialism and democracy inform their desire to industrialize and how does it affect their view of is implementation. Yes this would mean putting quite a bit more effort into than I put into my examples, but I do wish for yours to be better than mine. In many ways it already is.