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No worries! I'll re-write.

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Name: Maeve Hayes aka Red Haze

Age: 18

Gender: Female

Powers: Perfect aim, knowledge of pressure points.

Appearance:
Street clothes - Short red hair, combat boots, all black clothes.
Costume - Gray dirt bike and gear, a dark red helmet, and as many projectiles as she can hide on herself.

Bio: Maeve grew up in a rough neighbourhood. Her parents were the founding members of a local gang known as the Main St. Monsters: a group that committed robberies in monster costumes. Her parents wore The Swamp Thing and Bigfoot. When she was 14 there was a coupe, and her parents were killed.

Maeve and her 9 year old brother, Gilroy, should have been sent to foster care... But they discovered that their parents had never gotten them birth certificates. No documentation, no legal records... They were ghosts. So Maeve was left to raise her brother alone.

At 16 years old, Maeve was hired as a body guard by actress Kiri Henare. Along with a paycheck, Maeve and Gilroy received a place to stay and access to Kiri's tutors. But how the three met remains a mystery to most.

At 17, Maeve began spending her free hours breaking up gangs on the sly. She would knock key members out, one by one, and leave them where 'proper' heroes could bring them to justice.

Now 18, Maeve's getting good at both of her jobs. In fact, she thinks it's time her alter ego Red Haze moves up the big leagues.
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I'm going to let my go-gm's decide your CS's fate as i'm unable to decide as I can see the pros and cons of your char being on the team and in the RP but to me the pros a nd cons are pretty even