[quote=@LordDeadpool] [b]Character you have created:[/b] [color=7a0000]John Anthony Black[/color] [b]Alias:[/b] Overseer [/quote] This application is a little light on what your character actually does. You mention that he is an information broker/weapons collector. If there are things that you only want the GM's to know about, send a PM to NMS, Hound, and me so that we can approve it (i.e. types of weapons, etc). For the "Do you know how to post pictures on RPG boards?," you do that by using the image code, as followes: [code][img]image url goes here[/img][/code] [hider=example][img]https://orig02.deviantart.net/6292/f/2017/227/9/b/superheroine_arachne_by_blazbaros-dbk72cl.png[/img][/hider] You can also press the "picture frame" button at the top of the reply window or Ctrl+G (not sure what it is on Mac) to create this code. Also, as I read your application, I noticed that you had quite a few homonym typos (some repeated several times). Things like buy/by, their/there/they're, and before/be for. Could you clean up these typos? Finally, when writing dialogue, whenever you have a new speaker, you must start a new paragraph. This helps prevents walls of text and increases readability. Otherwise, looks good so far.