[@The One]

So the first problem is improper formatting. I know I did complain about my own formatting being less elegant, but I still want you to have an overview section instead of separate personality and biography/history/backstory sections. Since his backstory is more personality information this may actually help it be more coherent. Oh and just get rid of the other section. Okay where do we go from here... 

Reptile is from a far off land. Where? What is it like?  Does he feel any longing for it? Does he even know where he came from? If not does it bother him that he doesn't know? Why does he travel? Where has he been? Is there any reason he wants to travel to Uskary? Does something their interest him? Is he passing through? Is it just a checkbox on places to go? Under what circumstances does he find himself in the country. Where did he learn to use "all weapons?" Does he often find it useful? He's a salamander so he's pretty small, does he find weapons made for larger animals like rifles something he'd want to use, but can't? How does he deal with significantly larger animals like bears? Can he even fight significantly larger animals because it would probably be really hard?Does he find it hard to avoid fights in his travels? Has he not been travelling long enough to become more aware of other people trying to manipulate him? How is he good at understanding peoples' feelings? Did he just pick it up on the way or did someone teach him about people?

In general I want him to be a deeper character because it feels right now like a shallow attempt to make a generically good character that is removed from the troubles of the world, possibly to be this objective third party with fighting skills to boot so he's never in a bad situation really. All of these are things I wasn't really looking for in characters. There are to be no heroes and good intentions shall go without hurting somebody. I mean being able to fight is fine, but tacked on to everything else it sort of leaves a bad taste in my mouth. At least his gullibility can be narratively useful, but I would not mind seeing that axed in the name of making Reptile in some way more interesting.

And oh, I didn't realize that you were actually going to immediately post four more dudes. um... this is going to take a while. Why don't you focus on making one for now. I realize now I opened myself up to this, but... I guess I just didn't foresee it being such an immediate issue.

If I like any of the other ones I'll let you know, but I cannot accept Reptile and if the rest of them are of the same quality I won't be able to allow those either.

[@Bright_Ops] Yeah, I'll get right on that.