reading Cuddle's cs now, I'll post soon, also [@slayerofkings] mentioned interest through pm, so welcome and throw a cs up. (in the ooc preferably with a hider

[@CuddleKitten] 
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OOOOOOOOkay, here I go!

Well, all in all not bad, though normally we wait to approve it in ooc to post it in the character tab, but thats fine, its nothing to wig out over like I've seen people in other RPs do.

Some main things I'd like to see cleared up though:
	[u]Magic description[/u]- Just go into a bit of detail what her shadow magic does. doesn't have to be crazy, but it gives us an idea of what she is capable of

	[u]Demon things that fly out of her mouth[/u]- mmmmmmkay, well, that is different for sure. But I'm not entire sure about it. Mostly because I don't think a living Pandora's box will be good, though if she could for instance summon particular ones for aid. It does seem to match the niphilim guild, but they are some pretty wicked bad guys from what I read. What I guess I am trying to say is that while I'm not a fan of this, I think it would be ok if you could summon one particular demon to fight alongside you to help make up for the physical disabilities.

	[u]stitched mouth[/u]- So if she has to stitch her mouth shut to keep from summoning a demon, how does she eat, drink, or talk? because if she can do those things fine then she should be fine without having to stitch it shut..... unless she just uses a straw. And then to have to cut the stitches every time to summon would be a pain. although odd, if I were in that position, i would just get a zipper installed honestly. I'd hate trying to restitch my lips every time. ouch. Maybe she could summon through an incantaion or a tattoo of a particular monster. If you do summon a monster, we'll probably want a description of it too, but hey, you get to make you own pet!

	[u]the wings and tail[/u]- probably not if they are just out in the open. I would say maybe revise this to a form of shadow magic that forms a set of wings and a tail whenever she needs them.

I swear I'm not trying to be nit picky, I'm just trying to alter things to where it would make sense in the setting. My characters would certainly not like someone rolling up in a straitjacket, wings, and a tail who uses shadow magic (no offense to Morgan) and can summon demons from her mouth if its not sewn shut. There are actual guilds in fairy tail named niphilim and shadow demon. Niphilim is a super bad guy guild that is known to summon demon type creatures to fight for them and shadow demon is a bunch of high ranking bookworms so keep that in mind too. 

ps: if you want to show the picture instead of a link to it use ["img][/img"] without the quotation marks or click the image icon when making a post and paste the picture url between  the two img codes

and dont think i didnt catch the deadman wonderland reference lol. I was thinking that the picture reminded me of another character, especially with that name haha.
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