[@AngelofOctober], you asked what broad strokes were, and there they are. I didn't include Rosai's failure to learn how to swim, the time she pinned a boy from another tribe in a fair fight and thereby discovered why her mother told her boys couldn't control themselves, or how she drank cactus juice, tied two sticks to her head and ended up declaring herself Queen of the Jackalopes It's good you have all of that. It's plenty of ammunition for the plot.