I..I..understood* everything but didn't remember it well. Still sucks though as I tried so hard to make the cs bad that it gets no appreciation. I mean the whole point was to make it so bad that it goes past the cringe and shit meter to funny at how actually damn bad it is. [quote]Tell me how a 13 year old even manages that. Full grown adults weight more than a thirteen year old. You're trying to tell me he can overpower an adult and manage to kill them.[/quote] Please, you can't be seriously asking that. It's not like he goes to a pit fight with them. Even today you have kids with knifes and guns carrying out hits on bigger people for their gang. [quote]He sounds also less like an assassin and more like a serial killer fine.[/quote] Assassin is a profession, not a personality or character type. You can be a serial killer and a banker, or a serial killer and a husband who owns a bakery. Character personality and profession are separate. [quote]There is no nuisance in his personality at all. [b]He's evil[/b]. Okay, what makes people want to work with him? Why is he on a ship full of people? These personality traits don't make him workable. He's just a lunatic.[/quote] Define evil -.- Anyway that is the personality section. Why he is there and working with them is fueled by his goals....which I should've probably mentioned. [quote]I think it lacks anything creative[/quote] Please, like just, show me another exact person like him. Hmm, I prob should've asked beforehand if you accepted a character who could be there for comic relief. Was kinda tired of every RP having characters with full backstories on everything, with overused realistic personality types(yes there is no personality type you could show me that is original), actual goals to achieve etc etc.