[quote=Darkraven]
Oh... well I hope my character and writing is up to standard. is it? I don't expect a standing ovation or anything, I just don't want to pull the RP down haha
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Your character is fine Darkraven. You're gonna be all--right. 

I was in the original RP and I found four basic rules that helped me not only thrive but enjoy it. 

-Know your character and those around you. 
-Respect the players in the RP. 
-Post when you can.
-Don't try to make a character who is a super bad-ass.