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Name: Saki Masukita

Alias: Dead-Eye Damsel

Age: 18

Appearance: [Hider][img]https://dncache-mauganscorp.netdna-ssl.com/thumbseg/1906/1906125-bigthumbnail.jpg[/img][/hider]

Position: Sniper

Bounty: 60,000 Beri

Personality: Saki can be a bit flirty but that's when she's trying to get something. She's a relaxed and strong willed girl who's never afraid to get her hands dirty. She often plays the part of a damsel in distress to fool her enemies before letting them have a gun to their back. She loves tinkering and making new things.

Background: Saki grew up on a small island until a Buster Call was made by corrupt Marines. There were only a few survivors thanks to the island's elder noticing the corruption just in time. She grew up on the sea without her parents but was taken in by another survivor and taught how to defend herself. The man who took her in was an inventor and lead to her love of it. After he passed naturally, she head out on her own, making a name for herself by stealing from marines.

Abilities: She has the ability to make something useful out of almost anything, a kind of blueprint in her head when she needs it.

Weapons: She has a custom made pistol that she made when she was 13. It packs a punch but is small enough to keep hidden. The bullets are made from Seastone and has six chambers that can fire one at a time or all at once. She also uses her inventions. An example would be her goggles, which work like a magnifying glass, allowing her to aim more accurately in long distance. She also makes specialized ammunition, such as exploding rounds and electrified rounds. She also has a little robot of sorts that she made but it's more for sneaking around since it has no weapons.

Techniques: To be revealed in the story. 

I had to repost since it wasn't letting me edit for some reason.
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Mmm.  Normally, I'd say its a bit early for the sea stone, but since its used for bullets (as opposed to melee or other repeated use items) I'm okay with it.  Just remember that seastone is an extremely rare substance so, at least for now, the odds of her having all six cylinders loaded with it won't happen very often, if at all.

The goggles I'm okay with.  

The explosive rounds are fine by me.

The electrical rounds, I think, should be power ups your character finds further down the line, maybe when our characters visit somewhere in the clouds.

The only change I'm not sure about are the robots, and this is more to do with the in-story (as far as I can recall the computing technology required to control said robots isn't readily available to most people).  I also think it has your character branching off in too many directions.  Personally, I'd start with either the gun technology or the robots(maybe make them puppets instead) and add the others later on?

Also, here's the discord 
https://discord.gg/Yu7nhg