Thanks [@AtomicNut], I knew you'd come through in the end. As for a reply to your conditions:

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I genuinely did not notice that I write like that. Perhaps because it's Evangelion I get carried away, or because I've written a similar character three times in preparation for this occasion. I don't know, and it's bugging me. I'll work on it. 

Yeshua is not going to succeed. At anything. That's kinda the point. It's going to be fun to watch.

OK, I'll change his history section to accommodate for that. 

[s]no ples[/s]
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