(I'm on mobile so apologies for any typos)

[@deathbringer]Thanks for the feedback, I really appreciate it! I'll try to answer the questions to the best of my ability.

1. Yes, Kaleo cannot speak using his vocal chords, but I was thinking of him interacting with notepad and pencil as well as using a frogged speech (pushing air out of the body and mouthing the words to create sounds) is that alright?

2. Yeah, that's true. I can make it so that Alto came back with his wife on various occasions and told stories about their adventures. But when Kaleo stops by, for some reason he's alone. And I'll be sure to proofread when I get back to my dorm. Does that help?

3. I would say that Kaleo wants to be like both of his parents so that the other is represented in him, but will be conflicted because he doesn't know which one he likes more; he's more or less doing everything so that his parents can be proud of him when they come back. Hope that's a little better?