No worries. It's a good character i just want to understand a little more. Commrnts in red below :)

1. Yes, Kaleo cannot speak using his vocal chords, but I was thinking of him interacting with notepad and pencil as well as using a frogged speech (pushing air out of the body and mouthing the words to create sounds) is that alright?


[color=ed1c24]if this is central to your character I will happily go along with it. As discussed above it will take alot of training between you and your pokemon to get to a state of non verbal syncronicity but though an initial problem for you to overcome I can see it ultimately working.

All I will say is from a purely rp respective having a character with a permanent condition like this can really hinder you as you have to stick with it through thick and thin which can cut down your options a little bit. Just from previous rps I know I personally prefer anything like this to have an out so if I'm struggling with the character I can amend slightly. I would suggest making it that he doesn't talk not necessarily can't just so you have the option if you really need it but it is up to you. I will accept if it's something you want to do just be prepared![/color]


2. Yeah, that's true. I can make it so that Alto came back with his wife on various occasions and told stories about their adventures. But when Kaleo stops by, for some reason he's alone. And I'll be sure to proofread when I get back to my dorm. Does that help?

[color=ed1c24] however you want to do it. I actually quite like the not knowing his parents thing and just having heard stories. I think its a nice storyline we could use at somepoint. Perhaps they used to come back all the time but after kaleo was sent to live with his grandparents they didnt communicate or come back any more? [/color]


3. I would say that Kaleo wants to be like both of his parents so that the other is represented in him, but will be conflicted because he doesn't know which one he likes more; he's more or less doing everything so that his parents can be proud of him when they come back. Hope that's a little better?


[color=ed1c24] yeah throw that in their thats perfect :)[/color]

Let me know when you're done and ill give it another quick read to approve!