[quote=@whizzball1]
hey guys
so I wrote the first chapter of a short story involving Spectre, Ruby, Maddie, and Shinji
please feedback
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B1nudriDMxTudjlXTlYzQlNtYWM/view?usp=sharing
I'm retelling Spectre's first appearance.
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I've only barely skimmed it, but I'll try to read it properly this afternoon after my classes are done.