I'll go over my personal qualms with it.

- You have firearms. Firearms and ammo are like gold in this setting.
- quantum phycist?? Is she or is she a trooper.
- was she travelling with the army. Did Aaron have a stockpile of ammo and firearms.
- Joined a merc group that only hunts cannibals. Sounds more like a hunting group.
- hannibal the cannibal - really?
- heterochromatic eyes. I just think its edgy.
- injured and surived without medical treatment in a realistic apoc. (Shot and slashed - bleedout, infection etc). Letting her wounds heal. This is my biggest gripe.
- big drinker, survives cowboy encounter. This was a joke but who gets piss drunk and crosses the nevada. Again this is me nit picking.
- survives dehydration...
- no explination as to how she meets the last hope group. We're in oregon (?) not Cali or Neveda.
- seemingly ok health. Despite gunshot, slash, dehydration.
- no explination of how she has firearms and any ammo (if applicable)
- perfect build despite injuries and dehydration.

This is my opinion from a player perspective.

You asked for criticism.

I'm not a GM/co-GM or mod.

The actual gm and co-gms opinions may differ from mine.