[@Timemaster] Looks fine except for one little problem! Unless your character spent the entire day together shopping and wandering the city (Which they may well have done?) not that much time would have passed, at the latest it would be late afternoon or early evening. I'm working on a reply to your post now, but as you're both alone together I won't be adding any character but rather detailing the contents of the book, or at least as much of the book as I can write in about an hour!