[@Holy Grail] Looks alright. Although I would make it a little more neater if you don't mind.

I highly recommend using the list below as a means for it (you can find this at the bottom of the page in "Formatting Cheatsheet"):
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[*] Item A
[*] Item B
[*] Item C
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Also theme... I highly recommend a more "Official" theme for her (If anything thats a Berserk Eva-01's theme). May I put you into the direction of these themes for a change?

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Option 1
[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=63SoPE-BCdY[/youtube]

Option 2
[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MkfrQ-cdm90[/youtube]

Option 3
[youtube]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Io7BoP_ve4E[/youtube]
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