[@Weed]

I would like to give some feedback on your post, after giving it a good read. 

1) It's very detailed; I love that!

2) There are a lot of run on sentences that make it a little tricky to read in places. Please, work on that in the future.

3) You need to title your post "Capitol City". It's easy to assume, at this point, that you are in Capitol City (as it is the only location created so far). BUT in the future, as more locations are added, this can get confusing. 

4) Overall, I love your character, very interesting. I'm excited to see where things go from here.