[quote=@Sirkaithethird]
Got it put together 
[hider=John White]
[b]Name:[/b] [i]John White[/i]
[b]Age:[/b] [i]36?[/i]
[b]Gender:[/b] [i]Male[/i]
[b]Occupation:[/b] [i]Caravan trader[/i]
[b]Sexuality:[/b] [i]Straight though not wanting a relationship as then he would have to settle[/i]
[b]Nationality:[/b] [i]Nomad of sorts[/i]
[b]Race:[/b] [i]Human[/i]
[b]Karma:[/b] [i]Neutral[/i]
[b]Faction Allegiance:[/b] [i]Anyone with money to buy, tends to float between factions[/i]
[b]Appearance:[/b] [i]John White, a man with a weathered face from wandering the wasteland he wears a nomads backpack and hat with a traders overcoat. Brown hair, no scars[/i]
[b]Skills:[/b] [i]Bartering, small weapons,charisma, and speech[/i] 
[b]Brief History:[/b] [i]John was born to a nomadic trading family in the family was, his mother and younger brother, his father being killed before John was born, that was somewhere between 30 and 36 years ago, at the age of 10 John’s mother was killed by a mirelurk, and it was John and his brother Roy, when John was 13 Roy was killed by a raider and John still blames himself. If John had pulled his pistol just one second earlier he could have saved his brother. Since thehe has been on his own, with companions coming and going. His only permanent companion is his caravan. With about 1,000 caps to his name, a 10mm pistol, and his supply John is content [/i]
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It's a bit short, take a look at the other characters in the index section to get a better idea of what's expected length wise. What I'm seeing at the moment doesn't tell us as players very much about your character, it's all very vague.

You might want to read the rules also. :lol