[@AngelofOctober] As a writer, I can understand by rule of art. I can't tell you how many times I've left a book part way through because... -YOU CALL THAT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT? -What the hell is wrong with you? That wording blows worse than a $3 hooker. -Mary Sue. So many Mary Sue. -What kind of plot is this? But honestly, I'm glad I can't draw for shit. I feel it's so much worse, for an the reasons you've said.