My personal opinion V2

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[color=ed1c24]- My biggest Gripe. Her parents... Moved to Last Hope Oregon before the outbreak? I understand the first time if you didn't understand or read the lore. The second time isn't as excusable, it just shows you aren't reading the material or are negligent or the lore. I suggest reading the lore over again and amending the backstory, her parents coulden't of been residents of last hope unless it was after the out break.[/color]
- Suffers from minor colds, sorry this seems redundant because everyone gets the common cold.
- She meets Parker - leader of her past merc group? Did she just leave the group and meet Parker, did she lead a merc group in the past? Indicating from her bio, no. Perhaps a biography hiccup.
- Profession: Ex-Mercenary. Profession is your job in the town, not what you were before you joined up.
- Did Parker find her anti-biotics? You never resolved this so it left us guessing. Did it take him a month to find it? If it did, well...
- Intimidation and Lockpicking should be explained, I'm sure Rum will ask her knowledge of it.
- Remington 870 on a corpse? Really? I find that really cheesy, if it was freshly killed why didn't the guy who killed it loot the gun off the Rizen? I woulden't mind people having guns if there was a well written, reason as to how and why they got it. Finding the gun is a huge cop out and easy mode in my mind.
- Considering she is so fucked up, would she even be considered in the expedition or would she be a medical liability?

This is my opinion from a player perspective.

I'm not a GM/co-GM or mod.

The actual gm and co-gms opinions may differ from mine.