[quote=@tobiax] *Gives you a cup* Welcome! [@Elle Santiago] Format's a bit tweaked, but I guess that works. I'd say that perhaps her Semblance can do a bit too much at once, but I may be able to be persuaded. There's also the fact that Ginto reminds me a lot of two of my own Remnant characters, a bit in Semblance and Personality. (Possibly three even.)[Not necessarily a bad thing though] There's also the point that certain things don't seem to... jive well. Like, stealth doesn't seem to come from her past, and isn't really noted in her training, and isn't a quality that'd be linked to her weapon or Semblance either. Also, just want to point out that she'd kind of be a Grimm Magnet. I'm not disallowing that, I just thought I'd let you know. There's also no evidence that being related to a Huntsman/Huntress would give you more Aura. [/quote] I knew it! I shouldn't have edited the stealth thing, uggghh. That's what happens when you edit it nonstop and don't give it another day to tweak, lol. Also, now that you've pointed it out, there's a lot of BS in my CS, mostly with the more aura thing. That's mostly because I was reading "The Games We Play" a while back and it stuck in my mind. As for Ginto's semblance, would it be alright if those large AoE, explosion things cost a lot more? Like she'd do it when desperate. 'Cause I really like the premise of her semblance. And if not, maybe just lower the scale of her semblance's capability. Fun fact: Stealth was supposed to be one of her main weakness because, y'know, shiny semblance doesn't translate well when you're in the dark. But in my eternal idiocy (and embarrassment), I thought, "Let's have her weakness be emotional and strengths to be combat". I'll be changing that asap! Well, if I didn't have classes later, I'd do it rn but I have to get ready. As for the Grimm magnet, +1. She'd hate it, but she'd love it as well. For the weapon, I'd probably have her upgrade to get some grenades, one, because it makes sense for long-range stuff, and second, it gives her a connection with her dead father. I'd probably need to flesh out her history some more and make some tweaks with her personality.