[@Vongola_Hasayo] Yeah. Point taken. Here's some feedback. First thing that immediately jumps out at me is Selfishness, Selflessness being two weaknesses. Now you can have both of those as character flaws [s]honestly the more I think about it, I'm not so sure about that statement.[/s], but they need to (well should) be specified. Or else it sounds contradictory, like he's somehow both in every situation. Like my character for example, doesn't like boys. But I specify around her age group. Because she also respects authority figures and protects those younger than her that she sees getting bullied. So I don't just have 'hates guys' 'respects dad and protects the youth' which would seem contradicting on it's own. So for instance, maybe selfless could be toward strangers to make himself look good to those he doesn't know, but anyone who actually is around him, he's selfish towards. Though that may be more superficial... (I'd suggest maybe changing words. I honestly consider that a strength. Even if it doesn't usually inherit good results for a character. It's still not a real 'flaw'. It's not a negative character trait or something that character would be better off without, if you get me. Maybe Naive or Gullible? Those kind of things, lead to being friendly to those who don't have you best interest. And leads people to do kind things for others, they shouldn't. Believing in the good in others, who aren't good at all. Etc. But unlike, selflessness, that is something they'd be better off without.)