[@Kaesus] I'll need a bit more detail on how his magic works. Limitations, duration, etc.; as of now the description is too general and subject to abuse. I'll also need you to PM me details on Marcus's Master, generally, I don't ask for details however you've set his rank at [b]Grandmaster[/b] which, in story, is a very big deal, so I need information on him as well, including any plans you might have for him in the future. 

Finally - and this is a very minor nitpick - there are a few spelling and grammar errors littered throughout your CS. Just edit those and address the points above, and you'll be golden.