[quote=@Efficacy] [@GalaxyRaider] I read your IA species book. I think the abilities of the Tzarians might well have been mentioned early on, but other than that I think the races are interesting and well-developed. If they have special cultures of their own, especially customs, those are really important to the identity of a race--not just its abilities. [/quote] Thanks for looking at it! It's far from a finished product. I expect the final draft of it will have a minimum of 20 pages. There's loads of stuff I plan to dive into.