[@shylarah]Awesome character! Well-worth the wait! I think you did a really great job with her ether powers and her strengths and weaknesses. There's only one thing that should be changed. General Vasaliev wasn't a priest, but a member of the Secular Army, as in, regular soldier. Also, this goes for you and [@Drakey] both, but could you make it so that Vasaliev (god, why I keep reading his name as Vaseline? bahaha) isn't something as high-ranking as a general? I just realized it wouldn't make sense for a full-fledged general to be hanging out in the streets and taking an interest in street urchins. Could you make him a lieutenant instead? I think that'd make more sense.

Also, could you give me an idea of how powerful her concussive blasts are currently? Like, would she be able to blow apart an armored tank? I'd be comfortable if that was where her power level was currently at.