[quote=@Silverwind Blade]
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Why? There's nothing wrong with either of them at the moment. They're both fine characters for the game; even their bios and service records are okay, but if you want to work on them a bit more then that's fine too. 
Not sure why you think I would have rejected them? 

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Cause to me, the bios and service records feel like rambling non-sense.