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and another round as always, liberties taken get in touch if you want me to make any changes

[b]Father Ilya Bjornlie[/b][@Draken]
Astraea greatly appreciates Ilya on a professional level. His calculated attitude to war along with his impressive dedication to his own craft reminds her all too much of her own father. His disdain for other people and ego maniacal nature are a less welcome reminder of her childhood.  Ignoring her slight father issues Astraea has endeavoured to talk strategy with Ilya many times yet has struggled to make any headway with her abrasive colleague who is often far too busy enjoying the smell of his own gaseous emissions to take notice of her opinions. This deep wound to her pride forced her to look deeper at her counterparts work. Upon inspectin she noticedhe lacks the spontaneity and flair that separate good generals from great generals and so though she is willing to follow the battle plans he draws up like any good soldier she is also eagerly waiting for the day she can step in show her pompous colleague how a real Lanostraen general does it.
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I only have one thing I’d like to note: Father isn’t an agressive asshole. No, it’s how he’s how dismissive he is, not in your face. He’s not one to to put down someone’s work (without reason), but he won’t bother noting it much at all unless it’s somehow exceptional and relevant to him.

That said, opinions are built as much on the lies we tell ourselves as the truths we see