[quote=@Draken]
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I only have one thing I’d like to note: Father isn’t an agressive asshole. No, it’s how he’s how dismissive he is, not in your face. He’s not one to to put down someone’s work (without reason), but he won’t bother noting it much at all unless it’s somehow exceptional and relevant to him.

That said, opinions are built as much on the lies we tell ourselves as the truths we see
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no worries. It was just a basis tbh... did you have anything in mind, how do you want it changed?
feel free to pm me if needs be