[@aladdin_sane]

Approved, that is some bio, and some detail and contexts included. 

All I'd say is maybe explore , he has a prominent background, what problems or things might give cause to rattle the guided cage a little :) 

Sorry it took me a while to read that Bio! 

[@Robo27]
Don't worry. Long bios are nice. Il not judge you for a shorter bio. 
Every character is good in its own way, in its own interpretation.