So, first off, I've added the Telekinesis power to my sheet - [quote][b]Telekinetic:[/b] – Focusing his power, Oren reaches out with his mind and ether to take hold of any item or person he so desires, as long as he can see or visualise it. Through this power, he can push, pull, bend, sever, and crack whatever he holds, though with varying degrees of ether needed. It may only take a fraction of the effort, but it still takes a toll on him when he needs to lift great weights. So, he focuses on using it for smaller projects instead - like snapping a man's neck instead of throwing him off a cliff. [/quote] This is technically a very OP power, in my opinion. This is, however, the standard set of rules for it. Next, my drafts for the relationships/opinions Oren has with/of Ilya/[@Draken] and Viveca/[@Scout]; [b]Father Ilya:[/b] Oren's opinion of Ilya is overall a little... sour. His arrogance, his privileged birth, his great concern for what others think of him; all are black marks against his name. He acts amicably enough around Ilya, and by no means will let his view of the man interfere with their work, but, well... Oren isn't the best at hiding it, even in silence. Initially, Oren did admire the man, because he works tirelessly to improve himself, his strategies are incredible, and he desires to help as many people as he can. Yet, as Oren observed him, he came to notice that things weren't quite all they appeared on the surface. [b]Mother Viveca:[/b] Oren feels a kind of kinship with Viveca, given that both she and he are descendants of the Omestri people. Despite their differing stories - he, being born a slave and she, born free - both of them have come to be here, be it through the divine will of Lord Varya, the lost Omestris, or some other higher being, or simply by chance. (This one needs expanding) Also... something I spotted while I was browsing people's character sheets to figure out what Oren would think of them; did everyone get the memo that the uniform changed from a red phoenix to a red circle?