[@KatherinWinter]
You don't need to rush. I'm fine if you take a bit longer to read through/use a program to help edit your posts.

And I only bring it up now, because without looking at the keyboard, I genuinely wouldn't be able to tell what one of those words were suppose to be. 

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Even though she was nearly a genius, being smart had nothing to do with Liz not trying to run. She [color=ed1c24]didnt[/color] try to escape because she was too afraid. Not only of what her owner would do if he caught her, [color=ed1c24]wbixh[/color] she had no [color=ed1c24]diubt[/color] he would because he had many advantages over her, but of everything. She had never been on her own. Plus the whole slave mark she had [color=ed1c24]bern give[/color] so that everyone would know what she was.

*didn't (i don't usually care about correcting these, but just for the sake of wishing to improve.)
*which ? 
*doubt
*been given

Liz did her best to keep up with her owner. But the beastkind had longer legs than she did and was in much better condition than she was. She was exhausted by the time he stopped. [color=f7976a][b]She was surprised to then he let the horse.[/b][/color] Animals were good judges of character. Maybe her owner wasn't that bad. 

*She was surprised to learn he had a horse? She was surprised that he pet the horse? (I just found this, but I have no idea what this sentence is supposed to mean.)
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Every morning she sat in the corner of her cage with her arms wrapped around the legs [color=ed1c24]dreeding[/color] the day she was sold. So far she had been overlooked. Which she thought was a good thing. She had heard stories of what happened to young slaves. She didn't dare hope for a good master. She wasn't that lucky. At best she would spend her rest of her life in the cage. She was used to being invisible. The way she saw it things could be worse so why stir the pot?. 

*Dreading

Liz nodded mostly because she didn't know what else to do. It wasn't as if she had a choice. She had never had a choice. That was a dream that she had given up when she was arrested for a crime that she didn't commit. She followed the beast. She kept her eyes down. The crowd scared her almost as her new owner did. In a way she was thankful for the crowds reaction to her new owner. She didn't know what to expect. She knew next to nothing about the [color=ed1c24]beastkin.[/color] She had heard rumors but she knew that those were not the most reliable source of information. 

*beastkind. ;P

Liz didn't know what to think of her new owner. He said nothing to her as he drug her through the streets. She had the feeling that if they hadn't moved he would have simply plowed them over. Luckily people moved out of his way. She stumbled slightly when he stopped suddenly in front of a [color=ed1c24]vender.[/color] This one was one of the few beastkind [color=ed1c24]venders[/color]. She did her best not listen while they were talking. It was none of her business what they did. 

*vendor/vendors

She assumed that they were going to be traveling [color=ed1c24]sinced[/color] he told her to get something she could carry. She had traveled a lot since she had been sentenced. But she had a feeling this would be different. She she could only hope that she could satisfy the beast. The thought of disappointing him terrified her. He would be harder on her then her father and the slavers. "I am ready to go." She didn't want to keep him too long. She knew that he had a job to do.

*since
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