[b]Kristoffer by [@ONL][/b]
[u][i]Spelling errors[/i][/u]
Albeit not that many exist

[u][i]Bad dreams[/i][/u]
We'd like you to omit this part of the character. As it stands, it feels like something completely tacked on, and if characters are already being effected by horror scenarios then it eliminates the impact the game's events will have on them. The reason that Elgappa's character's bad dreams worked is because he made it part of his character with real effects on him and his family, a reason we were fine with it. Simply stating that Kristoffer has a shapeless presence in his dreams makes it seem like you finished the CS and then went, 'oh, yea, this'd be cool' and just tacked it on. It almost detracts from the solidity of the character, which brings me to the next point.

[u][i]Self-Preservation[/i][/u]
Every human comes with a sense of self-preservation. It's what's kept us evolving for millions of years and all led up to you reading this and me typing it out prior. I am a-okay with Kristoffer being a dirty treehugging hippie DEMOCRAT, but I'm sure that even scientists have an obligation to their fellow human to keep them from dying. I can put money on a vegan stabbing an animal if it attacks them. I'd be okay with Kristoffer being a pacifist, but IIRC, even pacifism has a clause on self-defense and self-preservation. Putting that quirk into his personality traits almost detracts from the character and makes him unlikeable, knowing he'll be a hindrance in any dangerous situation.

[b]Nik by [@ihinka][/b]
[u][i]Occupation[/i][/u]
Let me preface this by saying that I do apologize, because this critique is entirely my fault. I should have steered you in the right direction from the get-go instead of just going '*like* lol teehee great!'

This is a science expedition put together by the UN to figure out why aquatic species are dying off at catastrophic levels. A mission like this probably wouldn't recruit an archaeologist. I am fine with keeping the archaeozoology, as it's tangentially related to the mission, so you may keep either archaeology or archaeozoology as her Minor and her passion.

The sheet itself is completely squeaky-clean, but all you'd have to do is ctrl+f on Microsoft Word(Or OpenOffice for cool kids like me) and replace archaeology with something else. All that really needs to be done is have Nik major in something that is relevant to the team's mission at hand.