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So uh...Helena and Lucius aren't his children. They're his siblings. Although I did just realize that with the ages they are, they wouldn't actually be possible. I need to take a look at that. Other than that, thanks for the critique, and I'll take another look at his bio!
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D'oh! Sorry, I was in a big rush to get through everything for tonight I misremembered things when I jotted notes down after reading them. That's my bad. The part where he left when they came of age stuck out so that is probably why I went full Psyduck on you.