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[h3]HI GUYS, WE FINALLY READ OVER ALL THE SHEETS![/h3]

Keep in mind these aren't final reviews but are mostly just a point by point tally of things we think need to be addressed or we really liked. It's in no particular order and some of us had more critiques than others. Use it as a guideline to do final polishing for Monday.

Judah Callisar by DearTrickster:

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*8 spells listed instead of 7

*I have already been over the sheet before, and I think everything’s pretty solid! I’ll leave it to the other GMs if you have things to add or point out - Dervs

*There is mention of her siblings “clutch mates” but nothing much else. Did she get along with them? Any that didn’t like her? Did she ever have to stand up for them? (I’m not familiar with Argonians by any means) - Foxey

*What made the explorers choose Judah? Would no one else act as a guide for them? - Foxey

*How did her family take Judena’s choice of suddenly leaving to head off with the mages? Did they encourage her, did they wish for her not to go?

*How did Judena’s family handle her marrying a woman?

*After the relationship with Leonora ended, “she wandered from province to province” perhaps list/specify which ones she visited? Has she visited them all, or are there ones she hasn’t visited?

*Judena is a very interesting character! Kudos to you for breaking outside of the mold and giving her a mental disability with the short term amnesia, she evokes a lot of sympathy from me.
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I definitely skimped out on the family details for Jude, in hopes to try to keep her history concise lol, [sub]whoops[/sub]. I'll make note of her relationships with her family.

I'm not super sure on how argonians feel about same sex marriages or relationships. This little paragraph from the wiki had me believing they have a unique view since gender for argonians is pretty unconventional.

[quote]How Argonians go through maturity is rather debated and poorly understood; sometimes it is stated that when an Argonian grows through infancy the Hist sap that it licks from the tree determines its gender and appearance. Ja-Reet's case somewhat renders this moot: as he was born away from the trees and matured without the sap, becoming an adult male without the influence of the Hist. While there have been some theories on "life-cycles," stating that Argonians might change genders throughout their lives, this may really be a reference to their reincarnation cycle with the hatchlings and the Hist trees giving them their souls (deceased male soul entering a female hatchling in the new generation, thus creating a new "life-cycle" and a change in gender for the reincarnated soul as they are reborn, etc).[source?][/quote]

Again though I can expand on that a bit to make that clear for her and her family.