[@Fairyfloss] Overall, Ateya is an interesting character. Seems quirky to me haha, I like it. She reminds me a bit of Lulu from league, I'm not sure if you're familiar. Anyway, I don't see anything too OP in her character sheet, so consider her officially approved!

[@Zyngard] I like the idea of another person playing as a familiar, it should add some great depth to the story. I would like for you to elaborate on his abilities a bit more, though. What do you mean by "enhanced physical attributes"? Seems a bit vague to me.

Also, I have no problem with your characters communicating telepathically, but over ANY distance is definitely pushing it. To communicate over continents is an ability that would require very powerful magic or an artifact. They might not have to be in the same room, but if you lower the radius to say, 100M, that's fine with me.

One other thing I'll warn you about, is having very low stats in certain areas. Each Stat needs to have at least 1 point, to begin with. Having 1 point, however, is going to have some serious consequences for your character. For example, a luck of 1 would essentially mean your character is cursed, and everything that could go wrong probably will. I'm not saying you can't do it, but it's something to think about.