[@Viatos] [hider=More rambling idiot]Thanks for understanding. And I'd like to extend an apology to all parties involved. I don't mind differences in opinions or styles. In fact, it can promote great growth between individuals and helps keep things fresh. Besides, whenever I do go about these mini critiques, I don't try to do it to attack anyone personally. 

If anything, I want so badly for them to improve. 

I'm naturally critical, to myself included. If I didn't think Vatalla was a strong enough stand-alone character, I wouldn't have uploaded her in the first place. But even now, I still think I can work to improve her in a number of ways. After all, it is not a previous character I've ever used or anything, so there is bound to be unforeseen flaws. Whether someone doesn't like the design or concept in general, well that's out of my ability. I will still try to get along with them. Opinions will be opinions. Even my own shouldn't weight too much on other people. I try to call out potential problems to prevent shortcomings in the future, out of love for roleplaying as a kind of expressive art and journey. 

And I agree to your second point. I am more than happy with being pleasantly surprised. That's why I'm willing to give it a shot if the GM doesn't find a problem with it. I just can't help but be pessimistic, being the jaded old geezer that I am. Surprised I haven't drowned myself in alcohol yet. And it wasn't my intention to kick [@MordecaiThe 1st] out of the roleplay forever. Maybe it might have been harsh, my first comment, so again, I apologize for it. I just would like to see a bit more effort. Pumping out characters so quickly is a bit concerning, honestly. Each one should be treated as a real person, not some kind of mass-produced text dump. I don't mind a cliche or unoriginal character or personality. Such a thing as 'originality' doesn't exist anymore. But still, I wholeheartedly respect an attempt. A character should be filled with passion and care, at least as equal to the quality of roleplay itself. 

This roleplay, in my eyes, has a lot of potential, so it's a shame to have it wasted. You know?[/hider]

[@Migyudon] I think we already have someone who has a droid, so I don't think there is anything wrong with that idea. Sorry for scaring you, if that's what I did. Honestly, everyone else is a nice person.