Here's my servant. Let me know what you think.

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Class Name: Archer

Alignment: True Neutral

Servant of: TBD

Weapon(s): crossbow (see Noble Phantasms), cutlass

[hider=Wish]
For all seafaring vessels to be blessed with safe travel.
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[hider=Base Parameters]
Strength: D
Endurance: C
Agility: B
Magical Power: B
Good luck: C+
Noble Phantasm: B
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[hider=Class Skills]
-Independent Action A: Archer can stay in the world for about a week without the mana supply from a master. It is possible for him to act and even engage in combat without his master’s energy, but to use his noble phantasms at full power would be too much of a drain.
-Magic Resistance C+: Archer can cancel the effects of any spell with a chant below two verses targeting him. This skill cannot protect Archer from the likes of [i]High-Thaumaturgy[/i] or [i]Greater Rituals,[/i] although he is much more resistant to things like divine curses and the sacraments of the Church.
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[hider=Personal Skills]
-Battle Continuation B: Archer can continue to fight normally even after taking significant damage. If he escapes from combat, it is almost impossible for him to succumb to his wounds afterwards.
-Clairvoyance C+: Archer can keep track of fast-moving objects within a range of four kilometres. In particular, Archer’s vision can ignore most forms of cover and visual obstruction from his target, such as heavy fog or trees. He cannot see through complete obstructions, such as a wall, though he might be able to discern the presence of an invisible target depending on how much they disturb the terrain. This bypassing also extends to “status effects” on Archer’s body or mind that would reduce his accuracy.
-Blessing of the Sea Breeze B: An effect that can be applied to Archer’s weapons, projectiles, vehicles, or body. It causes the air to be briefly removed in front of the target's path, and forcefully filled in behind, speeding up the target’s movement, or making adjustments in midair. In function, it could be compared to the Mana Burst skill, or reinforcement magic, although it only directly affects the speed of the target, with the power of an attack only being increased due to the increased force behind it. Obviously, this skill can have no effect if air or a similar gas is not present.
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[hider=Noble Phantasm]
Name: Storm-Blast
Quote: "And now the STORM-BLAST came, and he 
Was tyrannous and strong: 
He struck with his o'ertaking wings, 
And chased us south along." 
Rank: B
Type: Anti-Unit/Anti-Army
Range: Long
Description: The crossbow Archer carried through his terrible voyage, he can cheaply create ammunition for it in the same action  as loading it. Having killed the albatross that was thought to have been sent by god to save Archer and his crew, Storm-Blast can bypass any protective skills or NPs of rank C or lower and lessen the effects of those with higher ranks. When Storm-Blast kills a target, any ongoing spell or magical effect the target instigated immediately ends. When its true name is called while firing it, storm blast launches a projectile infused with the fury of the storms that assaulted Archer’s ship at the beginning of its journey. When this bolt lands or is destroyed in midair, the force of that storm is released, producing a blast of thunder, lightning, frost, wind and water that sustains itself for a few seconds over roughly a 100m radius from the point of impact. If the projectile pierces into an entity, this blast is released within its body. Should this happen, lightning sears their veins, thunder shakes their bones, frost forms over their muscles and the force of wind and waves batters their flesh. A normal human would be instantly torn apart by this, and the rest of the storm’s force would be released as normal. Most servants could contain most of the storm inside their body, although with an endurance of C or less, the servant in question would likely be killed. If a servant with endurance of B or higher suffers the internal storm, their chances of survival are higher, depending on where the arrow struck, though the effects on their body would still be extremely debilitating.
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[hider=True Name]
The Ancient Mariner https://www.poetryfoundation.org/poems/43997/the-rime-of-the-ancient-mariner-text-of-1834
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[hider=Appearance]
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