[@Arcarius] Hmmm, it's definitely an interesting history you've written for your character, you have quite the imagination haha. I like the idea, but one thing I would like to point out is that the second paragraph [hider=(Right here)] Arthos father was in charge of Emberbay and was one of the high druids that lived within the town and while he expected Arthos to one day take his place he didn't not keep him from his childish adventures, a number of years later Arthos found himself following in his fathers foot-steps as he studied and worked hard to learn everything he could from his father but that is as far as the happy story goes, at the age of 14 Arthos father passed away in what seemed to be an accident, after the funeral Arthos had just walked into what used to be his fathers office on the second when he was confronted by his uncle who told him what really happened to his father and how he was arrogant and foolish to be in a position like he was. [/hider] of your history has a few run on sentences, grammatical errors, and a general lack of punctuation. I don't want to be a grammar nazi or anything, but I do want to maintain a certain standard for the sake of making the RP more enjoyable for everyone. If you're willing to work on this and maybe look back over your history to fix some of these things, I'll have no problem approving your character. Another thing I would like is for you to further expand on what you mean by "elemental discipline". I understand he has the ability to manipulate fire, lightning, and so on, but to what degree? Do you mean he can shoot some sparks from his hands, cast chain lightning, or conjure entire thunderstorms? How much energy would this take for him to do? I'd like to know exactly what he's capable of. As of now, it just seems like a very broad range of skills to have mastery over, for a character with an Int. of 6.