[quote=@Lovejoy]
[@deathbringer] Fuuuuck. That was incredible. And heartwrenching. But mostly incredible. If you have any further ideas about Astraea's father and his past exploits, let me know. I'd love to include him more.

Also, did I read that right? Did Astraea's mom leave to fight in El? :o

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I'm glad you liked it!
I'll give it another read tomorrow I'm not quite happy with it yet but it's 3am and I need sleep

Yeah I thought that would be fun to add in with your permission of course! I thought if all the better warriors were being moved I thought that it would make sense for Astraea's father to be invalided out and as a Lanostran for him to be more bitter for it but her mother still to be active? Is that ok?