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[b]Name:[/b] Evans
[b]Age:[/b] 1 year old (Mentally 20)
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Race:[/b] Robot
[b]Appearance:[/b] 

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[b]Personality:[/b] Being made as a tool for his country Evans is highly loyal to his superiors, following everything they say to the letter like a loyal dog, much to their chagrin as he doesn't seem to be able to detect sarcasm or undertones very well. Evans lack of knowledge on social standards makes him be a direct person and blurt out whatever comes to his mind. His idea of fun consists of sparring and fighting having little interest in anything else, though he has recently become interested in reading all sorts of military history books. He is mostly apathetic to new people he meets and often has trouble remembering their faces and names if he feels they weren't very important. His perception of things can get a good case of tunnel vision once he starts fighting, ignoring his surroundings and the situation and just focusing on beating the person he considers his enemy.

[b]Skills:[/b]  Evans is a monster at close combat, relying on his raw strength and his inability to be tired to overpower his opponent to the point of exhaustion. He also has experience in using long-range weapons thanks to his programming but doesn't like to use them, as he prefers to be up close with his opponent. Besides that, he doesn't have much in abilities that an average soldier wouldn't have, as he was made to be part of a militia.

[b]Abilities:[/b] Being made of metal has given him some resistance to melee weapons and punches, also giving him the ability to forgo food and water entirely, feel pain, bleed or rest, at the cost of making him too heavy to swim or stand on fragile material like ice or glass. While not having the ability to use mana, Evans compensates that with his tremendous strength, being capable of easily lifting stuff seven men would have trouble carrying and breaking steel and concrete with some effort. 

[b]Equipment:[/b] Evans weapon is a steel mace, heavier than most, to the point a grown adult would have trouble lifting it from the ground, something which Evans strength lets him do with ease.

[b]Brief History:[/b] Evans life began at a military project, designed to make a mechanical force, one that was made to be extremely loyal to be tasked with matters dealing with preserving the peace on Tinnec and assist other countries. The project tried to push the current technology to the limit while balancing with not making the cost of making the robots too high. While the original plan was to have the first prototype in time for the war, the Arch-Lancer squad had already been deployed and destroyed the fortress. With the government putting more pressure on seeing results, the team managed to finally create the first of those soldiers. The robot abilities being shown to the government and they were clearly impressed by the technological achievement of a human-looking robot specialized for combat. Unfortunately, the costs of producing a sizable amount of them would be more trouble than its worth so they decided to indefinitely scrap the project, seizing their assets and cutting their funds. As for the working prototype, they initially thought of deactivating him and storing him in one of the vaults, but it was decided to better use his capabilities and assign him to their new organization. His name was created by taking the first letter of all the major investigators in the project, or at least that's what they told Evans when he was being assigned to his job.
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