[@Tuujaimaa] Ithuriel is accepted provided that you alter Vis dolens so that it can only amplify pain up to 5x . Maybe it scales with how much blood you get in/on someone? Beyond that seems fine.

[@Invader Len] Alright, so, abilities. I don't really have any explicit issues with Gale or Sandstorm. I do need to stress something for in regards to the exact mechanics of those abilities.

So prae have [i]touch-based[/i] telekinesis. This does include Mirage prae, but their abilities are a bit more expansive than your average prae. Namely, they can infuse their vis, almost freely, into the element they were born to. So when Calypso is using Gale, Sandstorm or other elemental abilities, what is happening is she is basically releasing a wave of her vis outwards, arresting control of the air in her area, and then moving it with her will as an extension of her body.

In her Manifest, she is likely to have greater control of wind. It'll be more potent in general as well as allowing her greater accuracy and whatnot.

So using Gale and/or Sandstorm will take a few seconds with the first use. Beyond that you should be aware of the fact that when she uses Gale/Sandstorm/wind abilities that she will be capable of [i]feeling[/i] the wind/stuff in the wind (glass, sand, dirt, etc) that her vis is infused into because it is an extension of her being more or less. So if you use Gale and someone resists it and charges through, she'll [i]feel it[/i] even if she can't see or hear, or smell, or sense their vis etc etc.

Beyond that looks fine to me.

Add a note to Gale and Sandstorm that the first use in a new location takes about 2-4 seconds to properly activate. Doesn't sound like a lot, but it can make a difference.

Once that is done. Accepted.

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