[@Brocktree] Looks good, just a couple notes. Make sure it's okay with Arkitekt that you cross that bit of lore over. Other than that my only major problem is with the 'Other' section. For one, you kinda have to be connected to the Neuranet via neural implants if you want to be in the Collective. The Collective has also enjoyed peace for hundreds of years, so a digital attack of that manner would not have occurred, and even if it did happen long ago, at 37 Atellus is not nearly old enough to have experienced that.


Also, just a note, the OOC is indeed up and we no longer need to use this topic.