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[@Krayzikk]  Okay, I get that. Perhaps that was over correcting. Maybe make the mentions of her grandfather seem more connected/organic? (Then again maybe it was. It was interesting information, but it didn't seem to connect to the time it was mentioned.) Or at least let me know what he was mentioned for? Because if it was because of her last name being the color instead of her first, that's fine either way.
So, to be frank, it was more delivery than content. Sorry if that seemed overbearing at the time. Maybe just point out the Surtr bits? (Though to be honest, Mantle is more of a Muspelheim.)
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 I'll see about a rewrite, once I do some unpacking today. Chat with my cohorts and see if they're still up for it as well.